My First Poem: so close to heart

Hi guys and girls ... of vista forums
i am showing you now my first poem
so you will find it sucks
but even if it is ,just say it

you are sweet as sugar
strong as a hammer
and soft like a tissue
no you are clever
you are an angel
no you are better
you are a slave
but that don't matter
we can't say thanks
with only one letter
and maybe you can fly
with hope you fly higher
you as a person
is the best ever
when you hold my hand
i don't want to let it never
thats you in life
with me your better

actually its a gift from me to someone soooo close to my heart who i hope like it

Good Bye
and don't forget to say my wrongs so the next don't have same problems